The 5th story has potential

Rhialisa May 27, 2024 6:03 pm

The 5th story has potential

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    CuriousGumWad July 13, 2024 2:48 am

    Yeah it needed more interactions with the sister she didn't feel fleshed out and I really wanted more of her like having her enjoy having a healthy body and actually building a connection with one another. I kinda hated the fact that she had magic powers and just could suddenly become healthy (it's giving ableism + you know if it was longer they'd use the magic womb for horny).