Responses

I like the story so far, but I agree that the story shifting all over the place can be quite annoying. Perhaps some of the other races/characters could have been introduced later on, and the story focused more on the human/elf hybrid instead (e.g. I couldn't care any less about the elf prince and human apprentice couple).
i love this but i wish they werent all over the place.
i just cant tell when the scenes are happening and im confused to whether who we're supposed to ship since every race has these triangles going on.
but i love it nonetheless XD