I was hoping it would be a little slower, not so rushed, they would get to know each other better but after their third meeting was already love? They almost didn’t even talk… I know there is stuff like first love but idk… I expected it to be a little deeper I guess, since the theme is serious and important.
Like for example when he said he is only paralysed from the knees down and in the next panel they were already making out… It seemed kinda forced and very obvious, the author didn’t even try to make it more subtle haha it’s a serious matter but I felt like it was written very… well, without a second thought? Just spontaneously and nonchalantly.
In general I would give it a 6/10 at most, too bad because I thought it would be way better, mostly it was just way too hurried. Their relationship that is.
But the pacing was kinda off.
I was hoping it would be a little slower, not so rushed, they would get to know each other better but after their third meeting was already love? They almost didn’t even talk… I know there is stuff like first love but idk… I expected it to be a little deeper I guess, since the theme is serious and important.
Like for example when he said he is only paralysed from the knees down and in the next panel they were already making out… It seemed kinda forced and very obvious, the author didn’t even try to make it more subtle haha it’s a serious matter but I felt like it was written very… well, without a second thought? Just spontaneously and nonchalantly.
In general I would give it a 6/10 at most, too bad because I thought it would be way better, mostly it was just way too hurried. Their relationship that is.