This was written badly however, I'm happy the MC got away and the ML didn't even hesitate....

Spaceboii June 7, 2024 1:16 am

This was written badly however, I'm happy the MC got away and the ML didn't even hesitate. It shows how much the ML loved him and wanted to protect him. I just wish it went into more detail with the ML, there was clearly more then met the eye especially with the "coming to age" thing at the end and his father. There was so much they could have expanded on.

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