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Ya it's so cute but that was always on my mind. Like, what about the other children? I tough what if the Author in the end gives side stories showing dad's feelings for the children and his own way of caring? Regardless, I hope the author addresses that
Hm... after reading it all... I've come to the conclusion I enjoy the style, I love the parents love for one another, and all the kids are adorable. What I don't like is, and it's something I don't like in many reincarnation au's, is like... youngest child had older siblings, older siblings are ignored and just pushed to do what they were born to do. Then youngest child changes the father's entire life and feelings, while the older children are still barely a thought in the father's mind. There are a few that take into account the older siblings, but... I can only think of two lol. It's becoming very cliche. I hope it isn't just me feeling this way haha.