The tone of this story is weird and a bit rushed. No one fully explains anything. The mystery comes from people refusing to elaborate on the smallest bits of information. The MC is untalented, but became strong...because of love? His motives and history are rushed and don't entirely make sense. The author has stuffed entirely too many relationships and characters into this story so everything goes fast and you end up not caring about anyone all that much.
The first party, the love interest, the new team couple, the masters, the elf, the guild staff, the townsfolk, and a plethora of indistinguishable adventurers all come up often, in different scenes, in the same chapter, and there are only 25 chapters at the time I'm writing this (too many side characters and relationships). I just want fights to happen because all the interpersonal stuff is underdeveloped and hard to care about.
The tone of this story is weird and a bit rushed. No one fully explains anything. The mystery comes from people refusing to elaborate on the smallest bits of information. The MC is untalented, but became strong...because of love? His motives and history are rushed and don't entirely make sense. The author has stuffed entirely too many relationships and characters into this story so everything goes fast and you end up not caring about anyone all that much.
The first party, the love interest, the new team couple, the masters, the elf, the guild staff, the townsfolk, and a plethora of indistinguishable adventurers all come up often, in different scenes, in the same chapter, and there are only 25 chapters at the time I'm writing this (too many side characters and relationships). I just want fights to happen because all the interpersonal stuff is underdeveloped and hard to care about.