The way the ending of the Do and Hero in their past life don't add up in the beginning and final revelation is a bit confusing but it's my only complaint
W story! You can tell that the author was writing with the flow, but I could honestly care less as a passionately unpicky reader
It can be underwhelming/feel too short but a nice story to read when you're bored at night <3
6/10!!!! (≧∀≦)
(Ignore the fact I literally reviewed the story in the comment section like a weirdo.)
Spoiler(?) For the Demon Lord and Hero
The way the ending of the Do and Hero in their past life don't add up in the beginning and final revelation is a bit confusing but it's my only complaint
W story! You can tell that the author was writing with the flow, but I could honestly care less as a passionately unpicky reader
It can be underwhelming/feel too short but a nice story to read when you're bored at night <3
6/10!!!! (≧∀≦)
(Ignore the fact I literally reviewed the story in the comment section like a weirdo.)