Ews for the mc and ews for the mother. they literally disregarded the whole experience and...

davidclark July 17, 2024 8:09 am

Ews for the mc and ews for the mother. they literally disregarded the whole experience and life of the older seol-ah and just focused on their own perspectives. And the mc does not "GENUINELY" love seol-ah, it's pure out of guilt and fear of creating the witch seol-ah has to be— there's nothing genuine abt that.

They literally thought "It's fine by me, so you should too".

All and all, they lack empathy for the older seol-ah and they also turned super stupid. Lost the potential to be one of the greatest manhwas, ever.

Responses
    Honey Bear July 17, 2024 9:06 pm

    I... yeah I feel like they are missing a lot of depth emotionally in favour of the action... most manhwa writers forget how important it is to focus on characters and the conflicts, emotions, and struggle with morality they should be portrayed with in situations like this. Its times like these you can really tell what's different from the masters of writing like with Shakespeare's Hamlet and Crime and Punishment.

    Most stories these days are just modern trash... enjoyable... but never life changing or accurate. Always meant to make you feel good.

    davidclark July 18, 2024 4:27 am
    I... yeah I feel like they are missing a lot of depth emotionally in favour of the action... most manhwa writers forget how important it is to focus on characters and the conflicts, emotions, and struggle with ... Honey Bear

    It really doesn't need to be at the level of Shakespeare's to be able to create a good Manwha. This is just pure stupidity atp

    Honey Bear July 18, 2024 9:43 am
    It really doesn't need to be at the level of Shakespeare's to be able to create a good Manwha. This is just pure stupidity atp davidclark

    i dont mean it has to be shakespeare i just mean you can really feel the different in writing quality when comparing it to works like shakespeare, and yeah ofc its trash