Maybe it's because it's originally from a novel, but I love how dynamic the characters are, even side characters are given quirks to their personality that usually are taken out because of time and panel space, it's nice.
Only real critique I have is I wish their faces changed more, like uke gets told he looks pale and sick, but he looks exactly the same as when someone describes him as "glowing" or when he gets a hair cut and nothing changes with that either. I'm not saying a whole lot, but even just some eyebags would have conveyed his insomnia better
Maybe it's because it's originally from a novel, but I love how dynamic the characters are, even side characters are given quirks to their personality that usually are taken out because of time and panel space, it's nice.
Only real critique I have is I wish their faces changed more, like uke gets told he looks pale and sick, but he looks exactly the same as when someone describes him as "glowing" or when he gets a hair cut and nothing changes with that either. I'm not saying a whole lot, but even just some eyebags would have conveyed his insomnia better