Its so messy that it feels like a 10 yr old wrote this.

MintGreen July 23, 2024 12:20 pm

This is so bad and it's INFECTED WITH PLOT HOLES. The characters are also so darn unlikeable that it blows my mind how the author created them. I genuinely can’t believe how and why there are so many annoying characters in this.

Not only are the characters badly written, but they also can’t use their darn mouths. Like seriously? COMMUNICATE! So many problems would’ve been solved if these idiots just talked, but they just WON’T. I applaud the dedication for making this, but my god, the amount of frustration this gave me is INSANE.

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