I really love this story, but the flaw lies in the side stories. In my opinion, they were ...

Jinwoo & Colton's daughter July 21, 2024 11:49 am

I really love this story, but the flaw lies in the side stories. In my opinion, they were written too hastily and could have shown more depth and development

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    ram July 28, 2024 10:56 am

    thank you. i feel the exact same