poor writing choices.

salacia July 28, 2024 10:49 am

I don’t get why the author would add that. Kink purposes perhaps?? it just DOESNT seem like his character, he was never that aggressive to him and always stopped when he would ask it wouldn’t make sense for his character like i just don’t get it? plus it felt rlly unnecessary, i wouldn’t have cared if you wanted to go with miscommunications trope and let them have sex but WHY rape/aggressive sex? mind you, he didn’t even loosen him up… it’s just a weird chapter you’re ruining your own story for god knows what.

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