First of all the art went . I seriously like the art during like chapters 20 to 50 (i think) the art style were pretty, easy on the eyes, and anatomically on point- but then after 50+ chaps, Ridley's art became funny- like he's neck became short (?) and he just looked crappy. And I can't believe it, the art deteriorating at the same time the plot did.
Second, Vandel is too good for Ridely. He was so down to earth! He has amazing character change, he suffers too much from SA to threats to heart break and then to almost dying! But in the end, Vandel still chose Ridely. I actually hate Ridely, he's too eccentric (maybe because he's detached from the world and he's too into justice and loyalty) but I still don't like how they play him.. Ridely was always this close to having the best character change but then the plot destroys it as immediately as it appears. He character was too vulnerable with no absolute resolution. In the end, not only did he suffer but he also greatly hurt Vandel many times as well. Vandel sacrificed so much for him- I thought he was gonna kill himself after Ridley left.
Third, I like how the story started, there was direction! But then after the king died every went insanely stupid. Then comes Stefan's assassination being explained, the wedding, Stefan's sudden death (didn't even let the princess seek justice) as then all of a sudden everything went alright??? Did the Demon Queen really let them go out the territory without even attempting to ambush the princess especially when she knew that Ridley was busy fighting with his friend? The princess' romance was also very unnecessary. Additionally, I hate how she forgot that the Demon Queen visited her when Ridley was interrogating her. Then the sword's character change was so extra. Not to mention how at the beginning of the story it icks me how the Human King sent vanguards to the demon territory with only 4 members. Like only 4, what the heck? Then Victoria's character change and realization arc is so weirdly knitted, then she died suddenly as if she never experienced wars so many times. I also hate how the Bone King died, like it was so bad and undeserving.. I can't..
Lastly, I hate how the plot ruined the characters. They're fiction but the deaths were so useless and unnecessary! It didn't even appear that they showed remorse to the ones Ridley killed because the ending was so rushed. I don't like that they used Ridley's mortality to justify his turning into a Bone King. Lastly, I don't understand why they need to have that statue of Victoria and the friend, in the end they conspired for the ruin of the kingdom.
Ultimately, I still have a lot to complain but I'll just keep it to myself. If you really² like this story then forgive me for all the criticism. (^～^;)ゞ
First of all the art went . I seriously like the art during like chapters 20 to 50 (i think) the art style were pretty, easy on the eyes, and anatomically on point- but then after 50+ chaps, Ridley's art became funny- like he's neck became short (?) and he just looked crappy. And I can't believe it, the art deteriorating at the same time the plot did.
Second, Vandel is too good for Ridely. He was so down to earth! He has amazing character change, he suffers too much from SA to threats to heart break and then to almost dying! But in the end, Vandel still chose Ridely. I actually hate Ridely, he's too eccentric (maybe because he's detached from the world and he's too into justice and loyalty) but I still don't like how they play him.. Ridely was always this close to having the best character change but then the plot destroys it as immediately as it appears. He character was too vulnerable with no absolute resolution. In the end, not only did he suffer but he also greatly hurt Vandel many times as well. Vandel sacrificed so much for him- I thought he was gonna kill himself after Ridley left.
Third, I like how the story started, there was direction! But then after the king died every went insanely stupid. Then comes Stefan's assassination being explained, the wedding, Stefan's sudden death (didn't even let the princess seek justice) as then all of a sudden everything went alright??? Did the Demon Queen really let them go out the territory without even attempting to ambush the princess especially when she knew that Ridley was busy fighting with his friend? The princess' romance was also very unnecessary. Additionally, I hate how she forgot that the Demon Queen visited her when Ridley was interrogating her. Then the sword's character change was so extra. Not to mention how at the beginning of the story it icks me how the Human King sent vanguards to the demon territory with only 4 members. Like only 4, what the heck? Then Victoria's character change and realization arc is so weirdly knitted, then she died suddenly as if she never experienced wars so many times. I also hate how the Bone King died, like it was so bad and undeserving.. I can't..
Lastly, I hate how the plot ruined the characters. They're fiction but the deaths were so useless and unnecessary! It didn't even appear that they showed remorse to the ones Ridley killed because the ending was so rushed. I don't like that they used Ridley's mortality to justify his turning into a Bone King. Lastly, I don't understand why they need to have that statue of Victoria and the friend, in the end they conspired for the ruin of the kingdom.
Ultimately, I still have a lot to complain but I'll just keep it to myself. If you really² like this story then forgive me for all the criticism. (^～^;)ゞ