Shinoa

Dr00py August 2, 2024 7:48 am

I think the author might have fucked up with Shinoa on paper she's a really great character but she has no reason behind her like no driving force yk. Like I get her backstory but it doesn't come in to play with her current character because it feels like by the time we first meet her she was over it a d it doesn't affect her anymore. Also she has become to op like why can she already perfectly use the first powers she has no struggle. Which makes it hard to root for her she's slowly because a Mary Sue and it's such a shame because her potential was their but the author cares more about milking who ends up with who.

The writing of the story in general has been going nowhere for YEARS like the plot is great but the writing I feel like the character everyone is slowly becoming a former shadow of their former selfs. The characters don't really have a reason for doing what the do anything their just doing what the plot needs any if out of character.

I do believe the story can get back on track but the author needs to step back and get their passion they had a the beginning but it's starting to feel like a cash cow yk I just hope we can get back on track ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
(sorry if there's typos)

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