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Correction: he didn't define their relationship clearly and verbally.. (I forgot to proofread ugh )
I would accept this. They have flaws which is perfectly normal. But I would think he can't get more perfect than he is already
9.0??! This story is awesome! First of all, Alpha was green flag from the moment he learned the power struggle within his family's company. He was transparent to his followers and to his family about his ambition. Although he was a fu¢kboy, it was a given since he is an alpha and he's not in a relationship. He was possessive but at least he's aware and conscious about his actions. The only problem was that he did define their relationship clearly and verbally for the beta to know.
Erin was a pecular character, although he was meek, indifferent, and poker faced, I like how honest he is. However, i kinda dislike how he comeoff like he didn't care. They should've make him a scrambled mess once- but I know for the fact that being an over thinker actually makes you mor conscious and more nervous, so I understand how he acts. But I have to give it to Eren, this guy's got amazing emotion, he wasn't even embarrassed, not even once, like dang!
Lastly I loke the monologue plot, although repetitive but I feel like they had to make it relevant because they are over thinkers and that they are anxious people. To be specific, I like the humany side of the characters and I like how relatable they are- all that "I have nothing to wear" until the 'forgot the order of the surprise'. I also like how they didn't make Daniel's family too involved. But the ending was too sudden.. I wish for moree. Overall, I think this story is not really for everyone's pallet but really though, it's not that bad like personally this deserves 9.2 or 9.3 at best.(▰˘◡˘▰)