I felt NOTHING reading these last two chapters... Therefore, I REGRET ever reading this story as well. Something just seemed off in the end. The ending was so rushed to put them together that I felt No Emotional Connection to the storyline. It is sad to see a story that had great potential go downhill so fast.
Elijah went from weak to strong to pathetic again in the end. Even the words out the characters mouths did not match up with what we have known about the characters. Therefore, Her character regressed in my opinion. This was too fake in the end, and I will be lowering my original rating for this story.
I felt NOTHING reading these last two chapters... Therefore, I REGRET ever reading this story as well. Something just seemed off in the end. The ending was so rushed to put them together that I felt No Emotional Connection to the storyline. It is sad to see a story that had great potential go downhill so fast.
Elijah went from weak to strong to pathetic again in the end. Even the words out the characters mouths did not match up with what we have known about the characters. Therefore, Her character regressed in my opinion. This was too fake in the end, and I will be lowering my original rating for this story.