The development

Duck August 5, 2024 1:32 pm

Of her falling out of love was so good. They really dropped the ball on their redeveloping their relation ship. It’s also way too corny and immature given all the shit that’s happened. Also zero 2nd Ml development. They should have had Jeremy and rion be a single character to give a good reason for him leaving the picture, and make it more dramatic when they were kinda together. Like if lizenas house was a fallen dukedom and Jeremy was the missing younger brother. I can’t give this a 1 because of how good the beginning was but I’m at a loss on how to rate it :/

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