The Portrayal, Plot, Characters, Art & Overall Execution just felt like it’s trying hard, too hard actually.
Reminds me of kids trying to act mature or when kids try to get into adult conversations.
The general idea of the dream thingy synopsis was okay and had some potential but the fact that this took more half a decade without any improvement from writing, execution to art is just plain sad. Like 8 years just for this? (But if this kept the creator fed then.. okay)
The Portrayal, Plot, Characters, Art & Overall Execution just felt like it’s trying hard, too hard actually.
Reminds me of kids trying to act mature or when kids try to get into adult conversations.
The general idea of the dream thingy synopsis was okay and had some potential but the fact that this took more half a decade without any improvement from writing, execution to art is just plain sad. Like 8 years just for this? (But if this kept the creator fed then.. okay)