usually i like a story w a lot of smut but this smut is very underwhelming and it's annoying that him being an omega is taking so long to be exposed. some ppl think that smut can't be used to further a plotline but i have read many stories in which it does- this just isn't one of them so far. i wish there was more tension between the couple too. the mc is surprisingly very submissive to the ml where as i was hoping to see a bit more friction between them.
usually i like a story w a lot of smut but this smut is very underwhelming and it's annoying that him being an omega is taking so long to be exposed. some ppl think that smut can't be used to further a plotline but i have read many stories in which it does- this just isn't one of them so far. i wish there was more tension between the couple too. the mc is surprisingly very submissive to the ml where as i was hoping to see a bit more friction between them.