Good ml , but poor story for me

Mavikelebek September 14, 2024 9:40 pm

It was a somewhat good story . And male lead had so much personality and royalty that made the story worth reading. He is what a man should be, a green flag. But personally the main story plot was poorly executed. Personally it felt like author mixed 3 storyline randomly to cover up some plot holes. There are some parts that poorly executed to make everything ending "properly".

For example how the devil (I didnt remember his name) just very randomly (with an accidentally drop of blood) freed and during the 3 timelines of planning the only thing he did in particular was cry ing to get his moon. Like common man is it your evil plan? Same thing about our fake saint. It felt like the author couldn't decide what to do with her and randomly towards the end s/he said "nah let's kill her."

If it was not for the ML I wouldn't give him 5 stars

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