The story is A-Okay. Although there are a lot of things that are confusing and there are lots of things that didn't make sense, there would also be a lot of elements they put in that's a little off topic and would sometimes delve further from the main story.
I would love it if they focus more on the FL's bond with the Duke, with the ML an with the other people around her. That would be more wholesome.
The characters are great and I love the Female Lead! I love how clever she is and she's by far the best child FL I've read in a while.
I love the story, it's just not THAT perfect. I'm hoping for the making of the story to develop. And despite its flaws, I will still read it and finish this till the end.
The story is A-Okay. Although there are a lot of things that are confusing and there are lots of things that didn't make sense, there would also be a lot of elements they put in that's a little off topic and would sometimes delve further from the main story.
I would love it if they focus more on the FL's bond with the Duke, with the ML an with the other people around her. That would be more wholesome.
The characters are great and I love the Female Lead! I love how clever she is and she's by far the best child FL I've read in a while.
I love the story, it's just not THAT perfect. I'm hoping for the making of the story to develop. And despite its flaws, I will still read it and finish this till the end.