Responses
I think that what was missing was the romantic chemistry or the "love rivals" in 3p everyone likes everyone and these 2 don't seem to have romantic and sexual interest in each other (maybe there will eventually be???) idk
it was rush, lack of communication of the two tops who just one night agree to get along and have seggs with our old man bottom who go along with two kids (tops)
Ok now hear me out, I feel like there was a little something missing that I can't quite call out but it was still a good read! I loved that the author made it a 3p instead of making him choose one of them. Honestly both seme's where getting a little side eye from me BUT they both really came to care about Satoshi which was sweet. I enjoyed it!