Okay so I love the story and the tropes but I have a couple problems with it. 1. I wish their first time was more lovey dovey rather than the seme basically claiming ownership over him. But the uke wasn't like begging him to stop or anything like usual in BL so it's more of a personal preference of how I wanted it to go rather than a complaint. 2. I do wish the uke looked and acted older. He looks 13 and acts maybe 16. I know it's not uncommon in BL but it does put me off, especially when they have sex. The size gap would be 100% fine if he didn't look like a child lol 3. Was loving the side couple till it was revealed he was a literal minor. Could've easily made him 18 and there would be no problem with the age gap.
These things are typically in BL so I'm not to worked up over it, I just change it in my mind if I can. It's a really good story, a little fast but it's very much a historical fantasy story so not bothered by the fast develop of their relationship. There's not really a plot or I guess story? Would have loved more background on the uke's family and his powers, aswell as more information on what the seme does in his job. This would make a good long manhwa tbh. But it was definitely a fun cute read ignoring the slight twist in morals lol I hope there's more, I would love to see the kids all grown up! Especially Piaget lol
Okay so I love the story and the tropes but I have a couple problems with it.
1. I wish their first time was more lovey dovey rather than the seme basically claiming ownership over him. But the uke wasn't like begging him to stop or anything like usual in BL so it's more of a personal preference of how I wanted it to go rather than a complaint.
2. I do wish the uke looked and acted older. He looks 13 and acts maybe 16. I know it's not uncommon in BL but it does put me off, especially when they have sex. The size gap would be 100% fine if he didn't look like a child lol
3. Was loving the side couple till it was revealed he was a literal minor. Could've easily made him 18 and there would be no problem with the age gap.
These things are typically in BL so I'm not to worked up over it, I just change it in my mind if I can. It's a really good story, a little fast but it's very much a historical fantasy story so not bothered by the fast develop of their relationship. There's not really a plot or I guess story? Would have loved more background on the uke's family and his powers, aswell as more information on what the seme does in his job. This would make a good long manhwa tbh. But it was definitely a fun cute read ignoring the slight twist in morals lol I hope there's more, I would love to see the kids all grown up! Especially Piaget lol