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I agree with everything you said. I don’t know why but I feel like the plot was going well until these last part it feels like a really stretched image
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I agree with everything you said. I don’t know why but I feel like the plot was going well until these last part it feels like a really stretched image
After a while I got sick of Gabriel. If you really intend to help, then you have intended it that way, but why does it seem like he is helping while pursuing his love. Can't you see that she is married? I need Lloyd and Aria's interactions more. I know it's a slow burn but it really has taken a long time and the plot isn't fast enough