the plot point with the stalker client seemed a bit forced and like it appeared out of nowhere, since I don't remember he ever appearing in the first chapter(s) (which would have been important to happen, if it was supposed to have impact. even more since it was the only actual conflict,, plus it got resolved too quickly and suddenly.) I also think it was a weird choice for it to be a misunderstanding "cheating" plot,, even more since there was so much more they could have done with the fact one of the members of the couple literally belongs to a yakuza family,,, which, unfortunately, doesn't matter at all to the story??? it just felt constantly like the author wasn't sure what to write. it's okay, it was still fun and they're very cute,,, it just could be a lot better and that saddens me. HOPE there's eventually a volume 2 that makes this story actually shine,, cause it desperately needs it ,,,,
the plot point with the stalker client seemed a bit forced and like it appeared out of nowhere, since I don't remember he ever appearing in the first chapter(s) (which would have been important to happen, if it was supposed to have impact. even more since it was the only actual conflict,, plus it got resolved too quickly and suddenly.)
I also think it was a weird choice for it to be a misunderstanding "cheating" plot,, even more since there was so much more they could have done with the fact one of the members of the couple literally belongs to a yakuza family,,, which, unfortunately, doesn't matter at all to the story???
it just felt constantly like the author wasn't sure what to write.
it's okay, it was still fun and they're very cute,,, it just could be a lot better and that saddens me.
HOPE there's eventually a volume 2 that makes this story actually shine,, cause it desperately needs it ,,,,