maybe u just don’t know how to read deep masterpiece
I've read multiple. this is arguably boring
okay? I don’t know what do you mean by boring but yeah. boring if there’s no SA, abused or anything. you all find fault to anything but that.
you realize i criticized their dialogue and not the actual plot? stop putting words in people's mouths to validate your own idiotic point. nobody said anything about.
the story and plot itself is good, but the dialogue is uninteresting at best. and that's what makes or breaks a story; the dialogue between the MCs. now anyways, i thinks it's best you just leave this conversation because you obviously dont know how to refute an opinion without adding in your own conjured up implications
my apologies, miss/mr. as my excuse, i thought you are just one of the kind i am always have argue about having problems with harmless story but always romanticize and hyping the one that have the issues i have mention above. anyway, for me. it’s not really boring. it’s kind of deep dialogue about romance, a one-sided and etc. You can always leave in silence if you don’t want it, if it bored you. I’m not saying that you have no right to comment, of course you have. However, it is better to have a little courtesy to appreciate the author way of writing or anything? (fancy me saying when I read illegally but i’m broke)
nah bro im free to critique the story on actual faults. they just kept responding with "yeah.. ok" and that's dry and incredibly awkward to read, especially between two people in a relationship. the uke in practicular spoke like an awkward 13 year old. and while i do get that some people do so irl regardless of age, maybe the author wanted to portray that here, it just wasnt executed properly. it fell flat and didn't have any depth. the casual dialogue didnt keep me hooked
their dialogue is so incredibly awkward and flat that it doesn't flow and didnt interest me, just made me hella bored