The way the story progressed was kinda childish. I mean, like, i liked the idea and everything but i feel like it wasnt written well. While reading this i caught myself thinking "this was like written by a teenager".
Though they couldve redeemed it if they studied more and made more chapters but I feel like the author got lazy or didnt know how to end this story more logically.
The way the story progressed was kinda childish. I mean, like, i liked the idea and everything but i feel like it wasnt written well. While reading this i caught myself thinking "this was like written by a teenager".
Though they couldve redeemed it if they studied more and made more chapters but I feel like the author got lazy or didnt know how to end this story more logically.