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Yesssss and it would prolly become double the length if things were explained and brought out properly but the over all story made me geek it was so cute
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Yesssss and it would prolly become double the length if things were explained and brought out properly but the over all story made me geek it was so cute
I truly loved the characters... but the plot is a bit.... hmmmm chaotic? Needs rearranging? But the chacters are cute. So I finished it... the story has potential if it was done smoothly.
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