an embarassing read

MoonWatcher January 7, 2025 2:05 pm

seriously... if someone told me the author wrote this story in elementary school I would totally believe them. I had secondhand embarassment all till the end. The ML was always pissed off for no reason since chapter 1. He can't even talk without swearing, why? Will he die if he talks nicely?
I guess the author intended to write a typical SHOUJO story where the bad boy bully the girl he likes bcs he doesn't understand that he likes her, and the girl (which ended up being a boy somehow so it turned into BL) fell for the "i'm only nice to you" kinda act, even thou he's been an ass all the time.
They totally flirt in the middle of the classroom where their classmates are fucking present, like dudes the fuck are u doing really? There's time and place for certain things.
And let's not forget the artist, because this one ended up having amnesia one way or another. In one chapter the ML face is all bruised up, heck he even had a purple eye, but somehow, in the next damn chapter his face gets magically healed. He didn't have a single injury anymore.
Let's try to be more consistent ok?

Responses
    Chassy July 12, 2025 2:57 pm

    go write your own manhwa then

    Lulu July 19, 2025 8:41 am

    Couldn't agree more

    Lulu July 19, 2025 8:47 am
    go write your own manhwa then Chassy

    She has a point and she's only writing her opinion. Honestly, I agree with everything she wrote because she is right. This manhwa indeed gives the feeling that is written by an elementary school student. Many things didn't make sense and I had the feeling it's more like a shoujo manga rather than a BL. So if you don't like her opinion, either hit the dislike button ( which is not hard to do) or keep your opinion to yourself.no hate though. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Chassy July 19, 2025 12:10 pm
    She has a point and she's only writing her opinion. Honestly, I agree with everything she wrote because she is right. This manhwa indeed gives the feeling that is written by an elementary school student. Many t... Lulu

    I get it, that's her opinion. Totally cool. What triggered me is her last paragraph. That one was completely unnecessary. Like we're already reading in an illegal site. The least we can do is respect the artist.

    Lulu July 19, 2025 1:44 pm
    I get it, that's her opinion. Totally cool. What triggered me is her last paragraph. That one was completely unnecessary. Like we're already reading in an illegal site. The least we can do is respect the artist... Chassy

    You are right.It wasn't necessary to hate on the author in last paragraph.after all, they are people who worked hard to get this manhwa . TBH, I really liked the art. I just didn't like the plot. Plus as you said,we are reading on an illegal site so no need to be judgemental. I apologise I didn't read the last paragraph througly. But my point is there is no need to hate or use unnecessary remarks to hate on others. That's all( ̄∇ ̄")