I feel like the story wasn't entirely coherent (? Not sure if its the right word for it) as some parts were hard to grasp, I think that if it were longer the author would've been able to write what they wanted to express and convey far further, though that's just a speculation. Overall I liked it, would love if it were longer though ( not hating or saying that its not good the way it is i swear im just craving for more as it feels incomplete )
I feel like the story wasn't entirely coherent (? Not sure if its the right word for it) as some parts were hard to grasp, I think that if it were longer the author would've been able to write what they wanted to express and convey far further, though that's just a speculation. Overall I liked it, would love if it were longer though ( not hating or saying that its not good the way it is i swear im just craving for more as it feels incomplete )