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I know. I got to where she said what the gift was and I immediately went, "*deep*Nooooo, you didn't."
She literally took her baby apart. She didn't ask you to do it, the guy gave you advice you didn't listen to, and I don't know what I would have done. I would have seen red and I wouldn't have been able to control what happened next, especially when I was twenty-three.
Ah, I have to walk this off.
Dude, this was not feedback/constructive criticism. This was a BIRTHDAY GIFT she wrote SPECIFYING the parts of a novel the FRIEND wrote that SHE (Han jia) could write better. Do you people not understand how humiliating it must have been to get a gift like that. And that too after Jia was specifically told not to do/say something of this sort. That's just not being able to think from someone else's pov man.. and maybe being a tad bit insensitive.
Her friend has been enduring this from months, praising Jia and being supportive, but this was the final straw.