Stopping at ch17

Thatperson January 17, 2025 9:02 am

This is the first time I tried reading manhua (is it a manhua? Im not sure hehe)

And the story’s good but the storytelling is what gets me :(( its so clunky and the characters all seem… shallow.
The conversations doesnt flow well, the transition to another arc/story also isn’t executed well.
This may just be the style of all other manhuas and maybe most of the readers are fine with this.

But not for me, i prefer a bad with good storytelling, rather than a good story with bad storytelling.

Honestly, the art and story is really good! I wouldnt drop this if ever, but I just couldn’t read it anymore because the characters all seem so… shallow and surface level persona :((

Responses
    Ladiabla April 23, 2025 2:05 pm

    Ahhh I can't believe this had to be your first manhwa. There are SO many better ones out there

    Thatperson April 23, 2025 3:07 pm
    Ahhh I can't believe this had to be your first manhwa. There are SO many better ones out there Ladiabla

    Ah mb for not specifying

    I do read manhwas. It was my first time reading manhuas. Like the chinese manhwas, I wanna try again with manhuas if I ever get another recommendation someday :333

    Thank you for ur concern and yes I do agree there are so many good manhwas :33
    If you want, can I have recos hehehikhok

    Ladiabla April 23, 2025 5:54 pm
    Ah mb for not specifying I do read manhwas. It was my first time reading manhuas. Like the chinese manhwas, I wanna try again with manhuas if I ever get another recommendation someday :333Thank you for ur conce... Thatperson

    Oops this is a manhwa so I thought maybe the manhua was a typo.
    Anyways imma give you some recs soon(๑•ㅂ•)و✧

    なんでもない~ July 23, 2025 1:59 pm

    Honestly it feels like they are all like that and I read a lot of them too, the story telling is mediocre must of the time, or the translation is so ass it’s disheartening, for example demonic evolution is well paced but the translation became so ass idk what’s going on anymore. So yeah..