The reviews lied to me- this is so utterly….i don’t even know. I was promised a strong FL that wasn’t gonna be like those frilly cry babies of other stories like this.
She and everyone helping her are so incompetent it’s driving me fucking insane. How the FUCK did she go SEVEN YEARS without finding Theo?? Like??? HELLO???? When they stormed the villains place it felt so half assed, like how they didn’t even bother to show them LOOKING IN THE DUNGEON made me fucking TWEAK in frustration. Even if they went in and he was hidden in a secret room or whatever they could have at least made it so he could JEAR that she’d even attempted or some Idk at this point. Genuinely, how has it gotten to 52 chapters when NOTHING in the plot has happened other than Lilia going EVERYWHERE ELSE OFF SCREEN looking for him for SEVEN YEARS then suddenly a ceremony comes along and for plot convinces they made Theo go fucking crazy. This could have been avoided, or better this could have been led by not leaving so many god damn plot holes. Good lord- and then now that they’re seeing each other he’s going to forgive her dumbass. Honestly I’d rather the story end with them both dead or Theo killing jer and ending the world. At least that would be more interesting than seeing them come together again and being all hunky dory after having a “heart to heart” kissy mwahmwahs……
Sorry for this rant. I’m just so frustrated, this story had SO MUCH potential and it was ruined by weak plot devices…;^;
Anyways. Thanks for listening to my Ted talk. I’m dropping this.
The reviews lied to me- this is so utterly….i don’t even know. I was promised a strong FL that wasn’t gonna be like those frilly cry babies of other stories like this.
She and everyone helping her are so incompetent it’s driving me fucking insane. How the FUCK did she go SEVEN YEARS without finding Theo?? Like??? HELLO???? When they stormed the villains place it felt so half assed, like how they didn’t even bother to show them LOOKING IN THE DUNGEON made me fucking TWEAK in frustration. Even if they went in and he was hidden in a secret room or whatever they could have at least made it so he could JEAR that she’d even attempted or some Idk at this point. Genuinely, how has it gotten to 52 chapters when NOTHING in the plot has happened other than Lilia going EVERYWHERE ELSE OFF SCREEN looking for him for SEVEN YEARS then suddenly a ceremony comes along and for plot convinces they made Theo go fucking crazy. This could have been avoided, or better this could have been led by not leaving so many god damn plot holes. Good lord- and then now that they’re seeing each other he’s going to forgive her dumbass. Honestly I’d rather the story end with them both dead or Theo killing jer and ending the world. At least that would be more interesting than seeing them come together again and being all hunky dory after having a “heart to heart” kissy mwahmwahs……
Sorry for this rant. I’m just so frustrated, this story had SO MUCH potential and it was ruined by weak plot devices…;^;
Anyways. Thanks for listening to my Ted talk. I’m dropping this.