After a reread it feels kind of disjointed & some of the text (b*itch) seems harsh/crude (don't know if it's a translation thing). Renjaku is a total ass. Seemingly falls in love but doesn't communicate at all & treats Hana like shit. It had so much potential :
After a reread it feels kind of disjointed & some of the text (b*itch) seems harsh/crude (don't know if it's a translation thing). Renjaku is a total ass. Seemingly falls in love but doesn't communicate at all & treats Hana like shit. It had so much potential :