Very wholesome but lacking

Eve February 19, 2025 4:55 am

Very sweet story but lacking in some depth with the pacing being too quick. Could've delved a little more into how they came to love each other and the realistic obstacles they would face as a same sex relationship and being from different classes. The other gripe I have with this is Noah's look and attire as sometimes his outfits i.e. the cape looks great but many other times he's wearing women's attire or attire befitting a child like his knee high socks and short trousers. He also looked a little too feminine and juvenile. Other than that, I think the story was cute and an easy read.

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