My blood pressure is looking like the average cost of living rn, on the skyrocketing rise. I take everything back I need to rant otherwise I am not sleeping tonight.
SO many frustrating plot holes and nit picks - I LITERALLY CANNOT HANDLE THIS LEVEL OF PAIN. Someone find a way to put FL to rest so her rotting brain matter is put out of its misery. Like obviously it's not trying to be super heavy and hihi funny BUT that is so impossible to enjoy when the narrative is so indecisive. FL sees her loved ones CRY, loosing it, and chooses to let them grief and fucks off??? I get you wanna retire after 100 bs lives where you were too stupid to kill one hoe, but it'd be very easy to just let someone in on the fact that you're very not dead and living your best life.
The worst crime is the constant jokes. It's not even funny because the story fundamentally disrespects itself and its characters at every turn. The author needs to pick a fucking side here. Either FL is an honest tough tomboy who put the suffering of 100 deaths behind her or you just wanna throw trash at the usual shoujo fantasy tropes. Both at the same time might be possible but that requires writing a good story. There is so much to pick apart here but I can't be bothered anymore.
If you don't go in brain dead for this story you WILL end up brain dead upon reading it.
My blood pressure is looking like the average cost of living rn, on the skyrocketing rise. I take everything back I need to rant otherwise I am not sleeping tonight.
SO many frustrating plot holes and nit picks - I LITERALLY CANNOT HANDLE THIS LEVEL OF PAIN. Someone find a way to put FL to rest so her rotting brain matter is put out of its misery.
Like obviously it's not trying to be super heavy and hihi funny BUT that is so impossible to enjoy when the narrative is so indecisive. FL sees her loved ones CRY, loosing it, and chooses to let them grief and fucks off??? I get you wanna retire after 100 bs lives where you were too stupid to kill one hoe, but it'd be very easy to just let someone in on the fact that you're very not dead and living your best life.
The worst crime is the constant jokes. It's not even funny because the story fundamentally disrespects itself and its characters at every turn. The author needs to pick a fucking side here. Either FL is an honest tough tomboy who put the suffering of 100 deaths behind her or you just wanna throw trash at the usual shoujo fantasy tropes. Both at the same time might be possible but that requires writing a good story. There is so much to pick apart here but I can't be bothered anymore.
If you don't go in brain dead for this story you WILL end up brain dead upon reading it.