the folly of my past self...ignoring the comments....sigh. thats a few hours i cant get back.
mc is dumber than a rock. if u replaced mc with a rock, that would actually improve the story. world building is interesting until it starts to skip scenes, plot had potential but dumbass mc prevailed.
the folly of my past self...ignoring the comments....sigh. thats a few hours i cant get back.
mc is dumber than a rock. if u replaced mc with a rock, that would actually improve the story. world building is interesting until it starts to skip scenes, plot had potential but dumbass mc prevailed.