i’m sorry but i can only laugh when reading ts, the dialogue deadass feels so unnatural at times/silly because it feels like they’re going out their way to emphasize the toxicity of the seme when they don’t need to:
like i’ll just be reading a line of dialogue and immediately go “???” after processing it.
you wouldn’t even have to change a single detail in the image drawn, JUST tweak the line a bit to not sound toxic and it would make this sm more refreshing, normal, and not werid asf— like atp i’m just wondering “why?” like he didn’t even pursue him in a crazy toxic way, they just had a bad misunderstanding. but now that they’re together it just feels like they’re making him way “worse” even though he was technically always like this.
point being i genuinely don’t remember it being this drastic imo. it rlly just needs some toning down ngl
i’m sorry but i can only laugh when reading ts, the dialogue deadass feels so unnatural at times/silly because it feels like they’re going out their way to emphasize the toxicity of the seme when they don’t need to:
like i’ll just be reading a line of dialogue and immediately go “???” after processing it.
you wouldn’t even have to change a single detail in the image drawn, JUST tweak the line a bit to not sound toxic and it would make this sm more refreshing, normal, and not werid asf— like atp i’m just wondering “why?” like he didn’t even pursue him in a crazy toxic way, they just had a bad misunderstanding. but now that they’re together it just feels like they’re making him way “worse” even though he was technically always like this.
point being i genuinely don’t remember it being this drastic imo. it rlly just needs some toning down ngl