This had so much potential but it just pooped on all of it. Wtf. Why the rape?? Also the world laws r pretty bc cool but written to be shit. I kind of want to rewrite this and put it on A03 just a fanfic version that can better explore the psychological aspects and take out the random rape scenes
This had so much potential but it just pooped on all of it. Wtf. Why the rape?? Also the world laws r pretty bc cool but written to be shit. I kind of want to rewrite this and put it on A03 just a fanfic version that can better explore the psychological aspects and take out the random rape scenes