I think this is good

This is interesting. At first, I thought it was gonna be boring, but continuing i can see that it was not bad. It is interesting how they start at the beginning of how mc is weak, and want to be acknowledged, and doesn't seen to get along. At first, I thought he was bad, but I could understand not getting the attention of the parents. I wanna said more but can't explain it in words. Just that this might be very interesting later.