I like it. I’m pretty intrigued by the mystery aspect I very much want to know what happened to her twin. And I like the romance it feel natural. I have a couple complaints though like the falling. I hate how much she falls like is the author aware of no other trope it’s so annoying. Also the pacing is a little messy in some areas but it’s bearable and doesn’t really affect my view of the story.
I like it. I’m pretty intrigued by the mystery aspect I very much want to know what happened to her twin. And I like the romance it feel natural. I have a couple complaints though like the falling. I hate how much she falls like is the author aware of no other trope it’s so annoying. Also the pacing is a little messy in some areas but it’s bearable and doesn’t really affect my view of the story.
I’m excited to see where this goes!