i guess the problem to this interesting story is that mc yaps too much. like half of the thoughts and panels could be shortened and it wouldn't change much. i'm no author or a mangaka but for me as a reader it feels like that. too much thoughts, too much tooooo small actions lasting several panels which could take less space and time. but i'm very glad they moved to the dinner finally we need mc asking questions and ml answering him (and us!!!!)
i guess the problem to this interesting story is that mc yaps too much. like half of the thoughts and panels could be shortened and it wouldn't change much. i'm no author or a mangaka but for me as a reader it feels like that. too much thoughts, too much tooooo small actions lasting several panels which could take less space and time.
but i'm very glad they moved to the dinner finally we need mc asking questions and ml answering him (and us!!!!)