Fun concept but poor execution

Gandalf March 19, 2025 8:32 pm

It’s such a fun concept, I like the idea of a story about doing food delivery in another world, but so far it just feels messy and poorly executed. I don’t really like any of the characters and I’m just getting annoyed at all the nonsense… maybe it’ll get better later but I don’t know if I’ll keep reading. It’s not really that bad, just very mid, but all the missed potential leaves me disappointed.

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