Cute story, kittens

I really liked the dynamic they had. The way they've been clumsily obsessed with each other for so long was endearing and the way the nature of their relationship changed felt quite natural. I liked the ways in which they're both flawed, they turned out to be really charming characters. Mizuno in particular was cruel like only children can be, but I don't find him off putting for some reason. I do think it would have been better for him to apologize properly to Mitazono, even if he seems not to care lol

I know no one cares but I am bothered by seeing the way they fed the kittens. If you feed them like a human baby it's easy for them to choke. Having them lay on their bellies is much safer.