This was good but

dumbbitchjuice.png March 31, 2025 6:28 pm

The art was great but imo the storyline could’ve been developed a bit more. I’m aware the author prob didn’t want to make the manhwa too long but there were a few things I would’ve liked to see more of.

1) heejae and seyoungs past. I feel like there could’ve been more depth on their relationships with their parents, especially since it’s deeply affected their personalities and how they treat each other.

2) hyejin and woohyeon. The one or two episodes where we saw woohyeon wasn’t enough, I feel like the story would’ve flowed better if they’re irl characters were more involved in the plot.

3) heejaes revenge/pov. The pov switch was really refreshing but I feel like it was slightly rushed and ended quite abruptly. Also the part where he was doing all of this for revenge was mentioned but never got discussed after he fell for seyoung. This was deffo a huge part of contention for the cause of their relationship so it should’ve had its own moment imo.

I had more points but these were the biggest ones for me. Again this is MY OPINION but I’m open to hearing others too.

Responses
    Nyaan-san April 14, 2025 6:23 pm

    No no I agree completely, I was hella confused when I reached the ending, I was expecting the break up (where heejae starts his revenge but maybe regrets later plot ) like what happened to dude’s revenge plan?? I wanted to see some drama and then the two finally get together, but instead that whole plan js disappeared like it never existed lmfaooooo, would’ve been so good for that to fleshed out. Σ(っ°Д °;)っ

    dumbbitchjuice.png April 14, 2025 6:53 pm
    No no I agree completely, I was hella confused when I reached the ending, I was expecting the break up (where heejae starts his revenge but maybe regrets later plot ) like what happened to dude’s revenge plan... Nyaan-san

    You get it!!

    nanasyan April 21, 2025 11:41 pm
    No no I agree completely, I was hella confused when I reached the ending, I was expecting the break up (where heejae starts his revenge but maybe regrets later plot ) like what happened to dude’s revenge plan... Nyaan-san

    i mean it got resolved in his own pov... he planned on doing a revenge but ultimately fell in love with seyeong, so he gave up on it altogether. but yeah i definitely thought that would come up again and cause trust issues in seyeong when he found out ( ̄へ ̄)

    Nyaan-san April 22, 2025 4:52 am
    i mean it got resolved in his own pov... he planned on doing a revenge but ultimately fell in love with seyeong, so he gave up on it altogether. but yeah i definitely thought that would come up again and cause ... nanasyan

    :.)) wouldve wanted to see more, especially how seyeong doesn’t know that he was planning a revenge, like that revenge could’ve reminded him of his ex-friend and then heejae regrets and redemption arc before them getting back ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

    Nyaan-san April 22, 2025 4:52 am
    You get it!! dumbbitchjuice.png

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