Oh someone kill this dumb bitch. Like how tf are you so dumb? You're the one who was infor...

Ace April 2, 2025 4:44 pm

Oh someone kill this dumb bitch. Like how tf are you so dumb? You're the one who was informed that Dan is weak and has malnutrition and now you're so confused why he fainted after such rough sex? How stupid and apathetic is stupid and apathetic enough. I skip their sex scenes now. Because I feel like puking seeing them do this. Haven't see this bad a work in such long time. I hardly ever look down upon people but this author doesn't deserve to be called an author. Just some random Wattpad writer with no talent to write is making so much money with their subpar writing. It's funny to see this.

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    eremia April 2, 2025 5:11 pm

    Oh, my thoughts exactly. Amen. This is just stupid, poorly written and going nowhere. ML (don't even bother to remember his name) is beyond redemption. Not because he is such a bad person, he is just a stupid character in a story that is abt nothing. Sex scenes are boring. I mean, from the porn perspective it's passable, but this is just another sex that non of them actually wants, so it doesn't make sense. Not to mention there is absolutely no emotion in it. I here just to see in what kind of stupid way the author will try to wiggle out of this shit ;D