Although it is by no means perfect, this story does not deserve its current low rating. The author does a lot of things narratively that are quite fresh and brings nuance to a slice of life that is often missing in Japanese short BL manga. As I said, it has flaws (plenty of them- I honestly feel like a more critical editorial eye could have made this a rough gem into a real masterpiece; it was a missed opportunity) it is worth a read.
Although it is by no means perfect, this story does not deserve its current low rating. The author does a lot of things narratively that are quite fresh and brings nuance to a slice of life that is often missing in Japanese short BL manga. As I said, it has flaws (plenty of them- I honestly feel like a more critical editorial eye could have made this a rough gem into a real masterpiece; it was a missed opportunity) it is worth a read.