for example, the world building isn't bad, but it was really unfocused and some stuff came out of nowhere. it's trying the fantasy plot but it's still too much of at the level of shoujo. the party assembled easily just because one has connection, the villain came out too suddenly, and the answer also got explained in exposition. yeah and then the OP ML will solve everything. may i add that the typical ML's role is filled with the brother....
okay this is def a unique point that the position of the strongest and the one who save MC the most who usually belong to ML is snatched by the brother. but isn't this also bad bc i cant see where this story going both in fantasy plot or romance plot.
I can't believe I agree with you that the brother is the most ML material among the other love interests. Like the other targets are pretty hollow. The twin and lakash sister's bactstory is really tragic tho.
I was waiting the moment someone said they're actually not blood related! okay but seriously the brother actually ship MC and the black haired guy! unbelievable
i can't explain this but at the core this is only a reverse harem with uninteresting cast of characters. it definitely doesn't have confident to sell itself without the fanservice and pretty art. the dynamic between the female lead and the love interests are even dull. at this point i can only ship FL with her brother.