The storytelling and panels are awkward. It's very jumpy and doesn't flow. Idk if a translation issue, but it feels like someone's very first attempt at making a comic.
I agree with the other comments about the stiffness of the characters and the repetitiveness of the dialogue, especially the back and forth between the MC and the Sytem messages. It's a headache. I read up to Ch 7, and I can't continue. It's an interesting premise, but the execution isn't polished.
The storytelling and panels are awkward. It's very jumpy and doesn't flow. Idk if a translation issue, but it feels like someone's very first attempt at making a comic.
I agree with the other comments about the stiffness of the characters and the repetitiveness of the dialogue, especially the back and forth between the MC and the Sytem messages. It's a headache. I read up to Ch 7, and I can't continue. It's an interesting premise, but the execution isn't polished.