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I totally agree with you. I've been holding it together for a while now but no matter what 'making up to Pride' the queen did, I will never like her. Hate me all you want but I will never EVER like her. Pride grew up with servants. Granted her father was there for her but most of the time he wasn't. And then there's the Prime Minister who seems to have problem with Pride, I mean, the harsh underlying meaning of his words? If you think about it, all of them contributed to her being evil.
Anyway, sorry about this, I just wanted to get it out of my heart.
The story is great, re-read it like three time now but I wanted to comment on the mother. Like everyone else have talk about her, I agree with all of them. From that tiny ass section that the mother talk about her own feeling when she know in the future her oldest daughter will be a bad queen. I know that she explain the reason why she avoid her. BUT girly, from other perspective, you just fucking abandon and avoid your own child because you know how she will become in the future, and meanwhile, the younger child, who is destine to be a better queen, you doted and spoiled her and treat her as your only daughter???? So instead of I don’t fucking know, maybe help your oldest daughter or try to teach her or like not giving up on her and see if it possible to change the future, you instead basically treated as if she didn’t existed mean while you have another kid and you see that that kid future is bright so you treat that child as your only child. Is this not fucking the worst ?? AND now that your oldest child future has change, you suddenly wanted to become her mother AGAIN ??? GIRL YOU WERENT EVEN HER MOTHER IN THE FIRST PLACE.???? God bless the dad, he still being a proper father to the oldest child, but he need to be a lot more honest and strict with the mother and telling her that she is royally fuck up. I wouldn’t be surprise if the reason the oldest child turn out so bad is some part of it is cause my the mother avoiding her and treating her as if she doesn’t exist and then out of no where bring in her younger sis that she have no idea about and also find out that her avoidance mother have been doted and spoiler her younger sis mean while avoid her. Not to mention her younger sis have the same appearance as your mom and all of sudden your younger sis out of no where took your throne. I would have the same attitude tbh. That fuck up.